Tuesday, October 16, 2007

CREATIVE WRITING



The lady in turn in 997:
Marge Walker, was coming from her interview in the company of Bank Of America, which is where the main building is for the whole country. she was applying to be accountant their, but her appointment was at 1:00 PM, and got there not until 1:48 PM which made a bad impression on her when they were judging her skills of being a pro-active person. Marge currently lives with her daughter that has 3 kids all around the age of 1-3. So all day she is annoyed by everything, and can't stand young children or people that are modern. After contemplating the whole way in the bus about her interview; she gets off at the subway station and remembers while swiping her transfer card that she has to pick up her car at the shop in 20 minutes. And has to get out the business card of the car shop to call them before they close. It almost gave her an anxiety attack when she thought she forgot were her cellphone in the office, and had to take out everything from her purse. But all that stress caused her to forget that it was in her pocket the whole time. That day before she was yelling at her daughter that she doesn't raise her kids right, and backed up into a fire post. Thankfully her insurance covered it, but only at a car shop half way across the town.

3 comments:

Hilary L. said...

This is a good story but you might want to re-read because i saw some grammar errors. Also maybe put that part where she hit her car at the end, after you say she has to pick up her car from the shop.

Anonymous said...

JACKIE I LOVE YOUR STORY. GREAT DETAILS ABOUT THE LADY. YOU JUST NEED TO CHECK SPELLING AND YOUR SENTENCES. LOVE YOU LOTZ GORDA :D

Breeanna Wolford said...

I really liked this one.